google - senryu

a short piece

google - senryu

 

 

with no money
I google poetry books

and buy them all!

 

 

stork

Author's Note

Any review will be welcome

Reviews

[Lorelei]

I love the truth and simplicity of this. Looking forward to reading more.

[julian3]

A whimsical, tongue-in-cheek approach to combining a traditional form with a contemporary, credit-card enhanced experience of life.Very nice. Interestingly, although many writers strictly follow the 5 - 7 - 5 syllable structure, a number of Japanese haiku which are written in that pattern are translated into English with necessarily differing structure; this follows that line, with the essence of the poem intact yet unhampered by any unnatural 'forcing' of structure. Keep up the good work.

[Poeticpiers]

Idea is good, parameters for a haiku are five syllables seven syllables and five syllables
Haiku is generally about nature senryu about people

Your syllable count is four/seven /four not quite right but a good effeort