Time Without An End

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My heart is deafened by the resound

of your voice saying goodbye,

while the world leisurely passes by.

Words are barely audible

as your footprints sing a

emotional harmonic tune.

Time without an end rushes

to my side to keep me company

as memories blow in the breeze.

 

Tears water pain that has

forever been planted in my soul.

Infinity leaves,

but winds up back where it started,

right at the core of my heart.

My eyes are envious of my mind

that remembers the love we once shared.

Time without an end settles in the quiet

of the darkness hovering over me.

 

Our love was to be eternal,

now I sat alone grievously feeling the lost,

and the air I breathe screaming out

a name that once had a face,

but I know time without an end

will follow me as long as I see

the life we had together.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Tragic love...
stunning write !!!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

your writing style changed a lot!
your use of time in this poem is really great too

[?]

Now this I can relate to all to well....Tears water pain that has
forever been planted in my soul.

Heartwrenching and yet expressed very well...STRONG piece...Loved the ending

[Ruth]

Heart wrenched, yes...think it hit maximum effect! xoxo

[Star Wolf]

Yes, very beautiful and heartbreaking. You did a great job on this write. A tragic tale indeed. Awesome write!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Wow! This is beautifully heartbreaking... A gorgeous write indeed!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I like this. A real romantic tragedy.

[Cherrie Palmer]

a very strong expression of pain and love lost

[Tina Kline]

A very tragic romantic tale. A broken heart feels like death. An excellent poem.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I do believe that you would be an excellent author of romance novels..........what do you think?