Time Without An End

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My heart is deafened by the resound

of your voice saying goodbye,

while the world leisurely passes by.

Words are barely audible

as your footprints sing a

emotional harmonic tune.

Time without an end rushes

to my side to keep me company

as memories blow in the breeze.

 

Tears water pain that has

forever been planted in my soul.

Infinity leaves,

but winds up back where it started,

right at the core of my heart.

My eyes are envious of my mind

that remembers the love we once shared.

Time without an end settles in the quiet

of the darkness hovering over me.

 

Our love was to be eternal,

now I sat alone grievously feeling the lost,

and the air I breathe screaming out

a name that once had a face,

but I know time without an end

will follow me as long as I see

the life we had together.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[closed]

this has an quality to it that could only prove eternal
enjoyed it

-Dream

[KAREN]

Thanks you!

[closed]

yvw stories

[Eric Cox]

There is a beauty penned to this poem of heartbreak, excellent poetic imagery created!

[KAREN]

Thanks for the review!

[Eric Cox]

You're welcome

[David Scott]

I think I see a broken heart that cannot even imagine a time when the pain will end. Great penning.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Valentine]

This sounds like the story of someone I knows life..always thinking of a past love and not out looking for someone new who could ease her heart ache..I think poets are more dream like..don't you..lol kathie

[KAREN]

Thank you for the review!

[Jvl narasimharao]

Like your poem love is eternal.I am sorry not to read often your poems

[KAREN]

Thank you for the review!

[Loner]

Really touching poem i must say ...
nice work .

[Alicia Schroeder]

This is beautiful and tragic, being haunted by a past love, although they are not there, the memories take much longer to get over.. A wonderful read..

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

"Words are barely audible

as your footprints sing a

emotional harmonic tune"

Sounds like a song known all too well. That is what made this piece especially powerful for me. Your pen bleeds such genuine emotion.

[R J Askew]

Ach, sad, sad, sad, but beautifully so. I esp like the first verse and these lines: while the world leisurely passes by ... and ... Time without an end rushes//to my side to keep me company. But the very best part for me is this: My eyes are envious of my mind//that remembers the love we once shared.

[zainul]

You lived together with divine love.
You aspired your love would be eternal.
I strongly believe that your love is eternal and inspiring for others.
Great poem.