Magic Of The Man In The Moon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm drifting into the twilight

and I see eyes ignite with wishes,

briskly filling the air

as magical dreams come true.

Romance buds into reality

right before my wandering eyes,

and I almost hear you whisper.

 

Passionate thoughts race within,

your smile opens a window

and the outer banks of my heart

explore every emotion.

I catch a wave of subtle delight,

and desire warms my soul.

 

Elegnant sliver lining

holds the secret of mystical

happenings surrounding me.

Dramatic phases cause

my body to yearn for the

touch of your pearly hand.

Rhyme and poetic verses

of your voice soothe me.

 

Music flows upon your orbit,

and I close my eyes,

wishing one last time.

Lips trial down my cheek

as arms wrap around me.

I smile as I take one last

look at the man in the moon.

I realize my dream has already

come true.

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Avocations of Amber]

Stimulating visuals you've written in this poem. I'm a hopeless romantic and this piece speaks volumes of magic and wonder in love's enchanting spells. The delights of moonglow only add to the brilliance of this piece.

[KAREN]

Thank you so much for the kind review!

[Eric Cox]

A magical write. Beautiful romantic imagery created. Excellent work.

[KAREN]

Thanks, your review means alot!

[Eric Cox]

You're welcome :)

[David Scott]

I love your world. Can I live there too? Ha. Great poem! A soft loving expression.

[KAREN]

Come join me! Thanks for the review!!!

[Loner]

A beautifully portrayed poem which indeed
takes u to the moon ....

[KAREN]

Thank you for all the awesome reviews!!

[Loner]

U are always welcome ......

[Laura Maidah]

This is exquisite. "Lips trial.." Did you mean trial? or trail? I read it as "trial". It is wonderful and unique that way. You should keep it. Lol.

[Layla J Omorose]

Beautifully written and I love the imagery and the last lines of the poem. Very good

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

so lovely and serene. This piece gave me the same calmness that I receive when I go into my shell, my haven and write to calm myself. Wonderful

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

d'awwwwwwwwwwww


so romantic!

[Coyote Poetry]

A positive and beautiful journey in your words. I like the places your description took me. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Brad]

enthralling