Daddies Little Girl

For the creative poetry group.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Displeasure of a daughter's indulgences

shatter a father's placid heart.

Botheration overcast the minuscle room,

and somberness spreads into tears.

 

Convulsive sobs vibrate his soul,

but she stares in skepticism.

Her candescent eyes question his sorrow,

and torrid anger encircles her.

 

Her sensual ways of living

dresses her exiguous body.

Cerise lips make a pout,

and sarcasm echoes the air.

 

Her father quotes verses from the Bible,

prays for her deliverance,

begs for his little girl to return.

 

She laughs, and tosses her blond hair,

leaving despair behind.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Thea]

A really nice write...I find this so interesting because of the idea...Well done...
:)))

[Marie]

Sounds typical. Fathes and daughters start out as close and caring, only to grow apart as the generation gaps...