Timeless Thoughts Beckon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Restless nights merge with timeless thoughts.

Nature sounds give their hypnotic rhythm,

but sleep wanders around in darkness.

Me, myself and I ensembles in perfect harmony

of a life that is going no where.

 

Choral voices send out stress covered tears.

Questions does a performance in the depts of my mind, and fear savors the collection of timeless thoughts.

Sounds of the past blend with confusion of the present, the future drowns with every blink of an eye.

 

Reflections of me are strangers  staring back.

Timeless thoughts carry me into windows of no where.

Bright patterns in different textures are paths

shadowing my direction to deliverance.

 

Unorganized facts of life gather like dust,

and settles on every shelf of my heart.

Solutions seep away from reach.

Photos of what I  wish to be develop and teases what I am.

 

Timeless thoughts beckon,

a journey on self discovery,

luring me to an understanding,

Just to be me, myself and I.

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Loner]

Awesome write......

[InkSlinger]

The worst thing about the lack of sleep.. it almost always makes whatever you have on your mind that much worse.. Nicely done!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Unorganized facts of life gather like dust, and settles on every shelf of my heart. Love it!

[Poetic Beauty]

Thought are dust on the shelve. that is a a great line and thought. This piece is relaxed and smooth. The word choices are stunning and put together well.

[Star Wolf]

Its best if we learn to be happy with who we are instead of wishing something that can never be. That's the true path to happiness. Awesome poem.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

really reflective and provoking...

nice one, my friend!

[William Teague]

Wonderful. My only edit is "the future drowns with ever blink of an eye." I believe you mean (every). You've tapped into one of those universal truths; the struggle for self acceptance.

[WhiteWillow]

We all have to learn to be happy with what we have, who we are, rather than chase something that is not meant to be. Self acceptance is a tough life lesson to learn. Well written!

[Cassie Fraga]

oooooh my how I can relate to this on soooooo many different levels!!
that was AWESOME!!! great write!!!

[Thea]

Amazing imagery...I really love the topic here which is "time"...I enjoyed reading this...keep it up!
:)))