Float On Breathless Clouds Of Life

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Head rests on pillows of clouds,

breathe misery aside.

Sprinkle loneliness over the hillside,

and dress in the warmth of better days.

 

Anger blows in the breeze,

like unwanted dreams of tomorrow.

Be enlighten with translucent smiles,

and awake to crisp placid love.

 

Close your eyes to tears,

wish them away with silent prayers.

Feel rays of newfound hope,

glistening down from surpass time.

 

Embed stress in the passing breeze,

departure sings a melodious tune.

Nerves fade like bright colors of a rainbow,

and peace dances by on waves of air.

 

Float on breathless clouds of life.

Free yourself from cares of living,

and relax on a soft blanket of happiness.

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very enjoyable, calming poem...
tremendous writing :)

[R J Askew]

The last two verses are my favourites. I cld imagine drifting off in the way you describe. It is an idyllic notion actually.

[Raven Starhawk]

You have such a intoxicating imagination. It has emotions that evoke imagery beyond physical bounds. o.O I hope I make sense. Anyway I liked it.

[Thea]

Aw! This made me feel so relieved!
This is really beautiful...I like it...
:)))

[Coyote Poetry]

I could use a soft blanket of happiness. I like the good places you took me with you in the poem. A very nice ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Cassie Fraga]

**exhales... takes a deep breath and exhales again** yea... thats the affect it had on me!! that was just what I needed... like a pocket full of sunshine this is and is sooooooo going into my fav. pile!!! thank you for sharing... this was just what I needed!!

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Beautiful! It did a great job describing " ignorance is bliss".

[?]

Gosh I wish I had one of those blankets....lol
This was beautiful...sweet poem
What great imagery....I gotta get one of those blankets
Loved it

[Mary Fioratti]

What a wonderful soft poem, with words so sweet... I felt my head laid on clouds...
Happy New Year!
(((Hugs))))
*Mary*

[Robbie~xoxo~]

After reading this lovely poem, I feel like I should exhale and relax.... I love the imagery of floating on a cloud of tranquility. Nice write.