A Jounery In Time

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fatigability from existence,

wearying the body and brain.

Melancholy quarantines euphoric,

and life needs an escape.

Time away will vitalize,

and make a person newfound.

 

Transatlantic flight over the vast sea,

eyes close as the heliac sun beams

and illuminates over the estuary.

Deafening waves reverberate and make themselves publicize.

giving melodic line of relaxzation.

 

Aspire toward the lofty mountain tops

where an errant breeze blows,

leaving an incense that invigorates a languid imagination

Ashen snow cascades over the skyline

and an intriguing smile gives away to captivation.

 

Respire the ponderosa where

coniferous trees grow,

leaving a frankincense of pine.

Fumous smoke vapours the air as it levitates into the ambiance.

An energizing serenity softens the soul.

 

A shangri-la garden stimulates the senses,

and gives scenic exhibition, and a prism rainbow.

Birds harmonize and windsurf in the wild blue yonder.

Sedative fountain tranquilizes to a place of

pure reverence and beauty.

 

Reposed and brand-new,

and ready to take on mankind.

Living makes sense again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[The XYZ Writer]

This is a very good poem. I love it a lot. I can visualize everything you wrote. Everyone needs a break from life. :)

[Loner]

Nice work thanks for sharing....

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the ending. I could use a escape from the craziness. I live the life like you described in the beginning. Hard to find peace when never enough time. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

We all need some kind of escape when life becomes stressful and overwhelming. I find books are the perfect escape for a person who can not afford a real vacation. This poem is done well and starts with a topic all of us can understand.

[Jack Isaac]

Well written, and with tricky metering that is tough to pull off. But this works except for certain grammatical problems, such as "leaving a incense", that interferes with flow. Otherwise readers would get the metering okay. All in all a very good write.

Wohaa, I love this write! it's full of truth! And so reminding of myself too :P the world is rushing and running, we need to stand more still by such blissed moments of rest and peace. Excellent setting, and perfectly expressed! into my favs!

[Raven Starhawk]

Such a way with words you have. The first picture reminds me of myself. ^^* Anyway your poem was excellent.

[?]

oh now that was a nice relaxing dream, thanks
This was another awesome piece.
Soft and smooth and yes, relaxing

[Ruth]

You word this in a manner that the reader falls in love with :) Superb piece of writing, one that has left me feeling calm and thoughtful xoxo

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I want to fall asleep and have this dream, how wonderful!