Alone In The Woods

For the creative poetry group.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Noises creep all around

Footsteps crunch on fallen leaves

An owl beckons his call in the darkness

Whispers of a deep voice filters the air

 

Bare trees sends a prickling chill

Shadows lurk behind the stillness

Splendor of the woods has become eerie

A scream sounds from her own voice

 

The full moon hides itself

Movement moves closer

Gripping fear rises like the thick fog

 

Claws snag her dress

Wet tonuge licks her lips

Red eyes burn through the darkness

 

Panic overpowers her

Her face turns ghostly

Weak voice begs for mercy

 

Laughter echoes

costume falls to the ground

Boyfriend hugs her

 

Grilfriend gives a hard slap

And leaves him in the woods

 

A creature wanders in the distance

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very poetic, superb indeed!!!

[~Blue Fantasy~]

This was very good!!! Your writings are awesome! I really enjoyed the suspense in it but not too scary an excellent balance!! Well done and mean boyfriend- he will be in the dog house for awhile! Lol;)))

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

That danger lurking in the distance was the icing on the cake.
The suspense in this poem was amazing.