Whispers Of The Wind

Whispers Of The Wind

A Poem by KAREN

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Morning dew awakes senses,

filling the air with newness.

Bright sun gives hue of rays,

burning with anticipation.

Birds sing a song of love,

sparks ambition and happiness.

The wind whipers softly,

smile it's another day.

 

Beautiful vivid array of flowers

bring an essence of fullfillment.

Sweet scents wrap around the wakening earth.

Buzzing bees woo each petal to sip sweet nectar.

The wind whispers softly,

smile it's another day.

 

Clouds float above the horzion.

Shadows shield the evergreen.

Leafy trees yield shades of  pleasure,

cascading a tapestry of nature.

Carpet of fresh cut green grass

adds color to the art of the world.

The wind whispers softly,

smile it's another day.

 

Rain wets the soil with gentle tears.

Shades of soft darkness stretches

around the sleeping silence

as the wind softly whispers,

smile tomorrows another day.

 

© 2011 KAREN


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Wow. This is gorgeous. Its so hard for me to come up with a review that would do this piece justice. BEAUTIFUL.

~anna rose

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a very beautiful poem. I especially loved the last line! The only thing I didn't like was the word, "newness." It doesn't belong there with the other descriptions and the tone. But besides that, your poem is great!

Posted 13 Years Ago


You painted a surreal world of nature in this poem! Truly beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful and has a magical, lyrical quality to it.
Great poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I LOVE THIS!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i think it is absolutely beautiful. it breathes of life and of happiness!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Line three needs revision.

Otherwise, a lovely poem! Everythin is beautiful if you look at it right.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is amazing. I love how it sets a scene.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really lovely.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BEAUTIFUL..

LOVELY..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 6, 2011
Last Updated on October 16, 2011
Tags: Dew, Sun, Birds, Flowers, Bees, Clouds, Rain, Trees, Leaves

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KAREN
KAREN

Harrisville, MS



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