Once Upon A Time

She once lived in simpler times

gentle peace surrounded her

Space was small

She didn't know who she was

She didn't know where she was

voices seemed far away

But filled with soothing love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Life was unique

Felt like floating on air

Feelings  she didn't understand

Grew daily

Even then she prayed

To know who she was

And what she would become

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Born into a home of love

Dreams were made

Pride filled eyes stared

She captured many hearts

But still she wondered who she was

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Warmth covered her

Memories were made

Time was precious

Her life was blossoming

But she still wondered who she was

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

She drempt of special days

When life would reveal who she was

What she would become

Where she would wind up

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Twist and turns were her path

Love lit her way

As she grew into a young woman

But once upon a time she still prayed

And wondered who she was

Where this life would take her

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautiful!

[Misty_Prophet]

Beautiful... Composition of the piece is amazing, as always

[STAR CHILD]

oh such beauty love and power here

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Beatiful and awesome imagery with pics that portrays wonderful story, excellent :)

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Beautiful! This is a wonderful poem of a life journey...the pictures you used were adorable! They put all the pieces together! Great write!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This is wonderful. We can spend a lifetime wondering who we are. The photos enhanced the story. I like the rather tender touch to this as well.

[Raven Starhawk]

The photos were a nice touch and give the poem a even flow. The poem itself though was what really stood out. It was a truly good write.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Poem and photos took reader on a good journey of life and trying to understand life and surroundings. I like the way you told the story in the poem. Thank you for the beautiful poem.
Coyote