Journey Of The Heart

For the creative poetry group.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know what I want

You're not it

Repugnant personality

Sinister smile

Your ominous ways

Deception full of lies

Ghastly terror when you're around

 

I want rhyme and reason

An enchanted affair

Shadows making love at dusk

Sensuous caress in a magic touch

Love that haunts my days and nights

 

I need peace and harmory

Romantic treasures in a smile

Unwinding path that leads to fullfillment

Sweet phrases whispered in my ear

Expressions of unity

 

I expect calm surrender

Passion that flows tenderly

Sapphire eyes swimming in joy

Silky creamy skin entwined with mine

Inspiring devotion and creativity

 

I desire transparent love

One I can see right through

Where two hearts abode

In perfect imagery

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Misty_Prophet]

Really beautiful, you made it flow so easy. I just love your mixing of words:
enchanted affair, transparent love, inspiring devotion... Perfect!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is beautiful and I love the part about transparent love.

[Raven Starhawk]

Magnetic flow makes this a killer poem. ^^* I liked it.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a stunning narrative.
It was a bit dark in the beginning
but ended in like a beautiful flower in full bloom.

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Beautiful! Very well said, heartfelt and great imagery! Thank you for sharing!!

[InkSlinger]

Love is what love wants... we all want the same things in love, but only those who know how to communicate exactly what they want, are succesful in love.. Nicely composed poem!

[Krystal Nicole]

Wow. Absolutely outstanding!!!