My Kind Of Man

My Kind Of Man

A Poem by KAREN

Mysterious eyes

Something glistens inside

Body so frim and tight

Arms strong and loving

They have a love connection

Smile is always the same

Dazzling and captivating

Our time is priceless

Money can't buy

Other women watch him

Check out his attire

Days start with him

And ends the same

 

Men, she doesn't need them

Broken promises

Lies

Deceit

The only man she yearns for

Is  him

He listens

Never cheats

He is always waiting every morning

In the department store window

Dressed in new attire

 

She loves her job!

 

 

 

 

 

© 2011 KAREN


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Strong words that play with your mind. Stong man to match the man. Nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I did not see that coming! Haha! Brilliant! There is nothing like a mannequin to do a human's job! Great job! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cool poem, probably has more personality than most. lol
He's well dressed and perfect abs.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lol..This reminds me of the woman who wrote about her perfect man...
who turned out to be Jose Cuervo. lol. Cute!

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow, this was a surprise ending. I like this piece because of the creativity. The persona can come across either psychotic or seriously emotionally scarred because of past experiences. He sounds like the prefect man, if only he could return the love. Yet at the end of the day, he is just plastic and therefore does not surffice>

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good one..!!


Posted 13 Years Ago


Love has a powerful hold. Sometimes it can come in such high waves that it whisks all out to a sea. Still loved how you wrote this

Posted 13 Years Ago


Excellent and very nicely written and he'll be outthere somewhere :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol Has to be one of your best hon! Epic! Love it...very clever...made me smile :) xx

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 23, 2011
Last Updated on September 23, 2011
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KAREN
KAREN

Harrisville, MS



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I love to write and cook! Me and my sister will soon be the author of a children's book titled Feelings Feelings Feelings, and a cookbook in the near future titled Two Heads In The Kitchen. I e.. more..

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