Where The Vampires Live

For the creative poetry group

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

She glares in the mirror

Reflections of gorey blood,

Horrid screams peer back

Long black finger nails trail across the glass

Fake fangs are placed into her mouth

Soon she'll be a real vampire

 

Black cape flaps in the breeze

Full moon shines in the darkness

Music blares from her ipod

Not country

Not rock-n-roll

But scary tunes she dances to

 

Wolfs howl in the distance

Bats dive down, red eyes searching

Her heart pounds with anticipation

Shadows creep behind her

Horrified whispers flow

 

Scent of death nears

She knows she is near the place

Where vampires roam

Her neck awaits for the sharp bite

 

Red scarlet blood drips from mouths

Eyes glow like the moon

Ghostly shadows behind her scream violently

 

A male vampire walks up

Warm hands take her willing body

Moans of pleasure escapes her as fangs

Sink into her waiting neck

Transformation happens instantly

 

Strength serges through her body

Teeth are now pointed fangs

Hungar for  another's blood grows

Eyes scan the darkness

Her prey stands close by

Mouth clamps down

 

"Cut!"

 

"How did I do?"

 

"Your teeth fell out

Take two,

And action!"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a beauty. I loved the imagery.
It was like a dream.
The twist at the end was a riot!

[Brad]

hah!!! at least there are no shiny vampires!!

[Raven Starhawk]

Alluring in its adequate beauty and surprising end. You have a way with twisting ordinary words and making them wonderful.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such great word usage then bang..what an ending...excellent!!!

[kurdapiaful]

hahahahahaha' LMFAO!

[Ruth]

lol I love this! Found it well written and made me laugh at the end...always a surprise element to your work hon :) Great poem!
xx

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. You gave me a surprise ending. I like the pace of the poem and the very good ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

Ha! You had me going. I love the ending. Great poem!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a unique take on the vampire genre and the movies hollywood produces. It made me laugh at the end. The details were good and it made me picture her standing in a dark alley.