Home Sweet Home

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Blue pillows spills through the fluffy clouds

Birds fly above the horizon

Wind whispers soft soothing tunes

Sun slowly sets in the eastern sky

Few colors sparks through the rays

In anticipation of a new evening

 

The air smells of pine

A few scented flowers still lingers

The chill is crisp but brings a freshness to the soul

Smoke curls up from the chimney

Filling the almost night sky

 

The sound of the rippling creek fills the quiet

A small canoe lays nearby

Waiting for the next time to float in the cool waters

Ducks bob up and down as they hunt for food

Fish bubbles to the surface to catch a glimpse of the stars

Deer sits in awe of the scenery

Bugs bellow out in their unique voices

 

Wait, listen, what's that noise?

Perhaps it's two lovers nestled inside

Naked bodies laying on a bear skin rug

Warmth heats them as the fire crackles

Laughter fills the room as they tease one another

They glance outside and smile inside and out

Eyes close and peace fills them

Knowing that their little cabin in the woods is their

Home sweet home

 

 

Author's Note

Picture is Thomas Kinkades. Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Lovely poem. You painted such a beautiful picture in my mind...ahh so lovely there's nothing like home sweet home with your true love. Great write!!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Wow..its lovely..!!!

[kurdapiaful]

Nicely penned!
for me, this is the author's wishful thinking. . .

[JanieB]

Well done. You have captured the painting with a great poem.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Being with the one you love makes any place home sweet home since they often times are your home. Very romantic.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

You have beautifully described this wonderful Kinkade painting with your own words. Very lovely!

[Tina Kline]

This creates a wonderful and joyful romantic scene. A cabin in the woods with nature all around is the perfect setting for romance.

[Ladysue]

oh I agree you paint a dream like scene..one I could get lost in..very beautiful...good writing..

[Shep]

Very nice indeed. You paint a dream like scene. It flowed with grace the word confine the memory of elegance.