Words I Couldn't Say

Arms hold me tight

Eyes questioning my thoughts

Lips brushing softly against mine

Hesitation is in my breathes

You wait

Hoping to hear

Words I couldn't say

 

Because you swear our love is real

Nothing can rip us apart

We're ment to live happily ever after

From now until....

 

You talk about the future

Marriage

Kids

The works

I could do what my hearts says

Just walk away

Oh no, I don't think I will

Your promising devotion keeps me here

Something is telling me

To say

Those words I couldn't say

 

Because I know we are real

I see it in your

Eyes

Smile

I feel it in your

Touch

Hear it in your

Voice

 

Everyday you wait for me

To says those words I couldn't say

Today I think I will

 

Hand in hand

Our bodies close

Kissing each other

You wait still

 

I look into knowing eyes

Courage is in my breathes

Here it goes

 

I love you

These used to be words

I couldn't say

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

Amazing poem :))

[Susie Q]

A special tribute to those three words. Making sure before we can say them that this is the one person we want to share our life with and that we have made the right decision. Keep writing these beautiful poems.

[Sarah Wlochal]

A brilliant poem! Saying "I love you" can be quite difficult at times. You wrote with a loving heart :)

[Chris]

Many thoughts... The words we say, the ones we mean... the ones we don't - rhyme and reason... many, many thoughts.

Chris

[Angel Bluestocking]

i love this part the most,
"I could do what my hearts says
Just walk away
Oh no, I don't think I will
Your promising devotion keeps me here"
i don't know why, but i love it!!
a chance to true love, so beautiful!

[WindSong]

Longing for true love is so overpowering and so consuming you captured so well in this writing! Well constructed poem I enjoyed reading!

[Rossen]

Sweet write !!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Arms hold me tight, nothing can rip us apart. Because you swear our love is real. I could do what my heart says, walk away.......but I know we are real, I see it in you. You talk about the future and something tells me to say the words I couldn't say. I know we are real and that you wait for me. Courage is in my breath, here goes.......I love you! Exquisite proclamation of love!

[Tina Kline]

Ah! I love you...the hardest 3 words to say. You risk so much when you do! A very positive love poem. I enjoyed this and I'm glad it has a happy ending too!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

WONDERFUL.. just brilliant and heart warming