Satisfied

I wish I had you by my side

 tasting sweet warmth from your lips

Your touch trailing down my spine

Feeling oh so satisfied

 

To see your gentle smile

 Eyes of deep blue sea

 How they shimmer in the light

 Feeling oh so satisfied

 

I hear your voice calling

see you everywhere

You are in my heart

 In my head

I just can't stop

 

I wish I had you by my side

 Laying together on soft silk sheets

Entwined and so complete

 Feeling oh so satisfied

 

Your heart beating next to me

 Hearing whispers of love

Laughter that never ends

Feeling oh so satisfied 

 

I hear your voice calling

See you everywhere

You are in my heart

 In my head

I just can't stop

 

I wish I had you by my side

So I would not be empty and alone

But you left me long ago

Found someone new

 Now I am forever unsatisfied

 

I hear your voice calling

See you everywhere

You are in my heart

 In my head

I just can't stop

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Art Sun]

Love is an ever changing emotion...we love and love some more and then we loose love almost as easy as we share it...nice work on this poem...

[WindSong]

I think it's very well written and very heartfelt and sad. It's just so funny how love sometimes just slips away, when you think everything is perfect in every way! A very beautiful poem, indeed!

WindSong

[Dreamer]

Frustrating...thts wht i think. Makes the pain worse when those the memories dont leave as fast as they have...

[Marie Harrison]

I agree with Tina 100%
Hard to dull those
Voices in your head
Once you've been
Rejected and left alone
But to be present
With someone who
Cared so little about
You would be worse

[Tina Kline]

The pain of longing and of wanting someone you can't have. These feelings that come whether we want them to or not. Now that's pain.

A wonderful poem here!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

The yearning and deep love shown but cannot be controlled, those feelings are so well expressed, top write :)

[Krystal Nicole]

Beautiful!!! Great job

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This was beautifully written, loved the flow. I was even reading with a tune in my head, lol
Felt the longing, loneliness with this.
Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing this with me

[Judy Ponceby]

Heartbreaking. Beautifully written.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

PAIN, in a beautifully written form. Wow, I feel the loneliness and betrayal.
Very well done!