Satisfied

I wish I had you by my side

 tasting sweet warmth from your lips

Your touch trailing down my spine

Feeling oh so satisfied

 

To see your gentle smile

 Eyes of deep blue sea

 How they shimmer in the light

 Feeling oh so satisfied

 

I hear your voice calling

see you everywhere

You are in my heart

 In my head

I just can't stop

 

I wish I had you by my side

 Laying together on soft silk sheets

Entwined and so complete

 Feeling oh so satisfied

 

Your heart beating next to me

 Hearing whispers of love

Laughter that never ends

Feeling oh so satisfied 

 

I hear your voice calling

See you everywhere

You are in my heart

 In my head

I just can't stop

 

I wish I had you by my side

So I would not be empty and alone

But you left me long ago

Found someone new

 Now I am forever unsatisfied

 

I hear your voice calling

See you everywhere

You are in my heart

 In my head

I just can't stop

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Truly a astonishing poem that set me drifting off into memory of such a situation not so long ago.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!!

[grayhaven]

A beautiful poem of longing and loss. Well done.

[Darl]

I like this very much. Those moments we have shared with special people in our lives that we will never forget or be able to replicate with anybody else. Very nice poem.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

How we've all most likely experienced this sort of pain. I agree with Craig, this is very beautiful and bittersweet. Impressive poem!

[An owl on the moon]

This just made me ache with the distance.. how i know the feeling too well.. the knowing that side by side would bring such satisfaction.. Beautifully bittersweet..

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem left me with the loneliest feeling...
and a pain in the pit of my stomach.

[Poetic Beauty]

This has a very sad ending and I knwo that feeling so much. I have walked that path and there is nothing fun about it.

[Jibey]

I think it would be nice... :-)