Satisfied

I wish I had you by my side

 tasting sweet warmth from your lips

Your touch trailing down my spine

Feeling oh so satisfied

 

To see your gentle smile

 Eyes of deep blue sea

 How they shimmer in the light

 Feeling oh so satisfied

 

I hear your voice calling

see you everywhere

You are in my heart

 In my head

I just can't stop

 

I wish I had you by my side

 Laying together on soft silk sheets

Entwined and so complete

 Feeling oh so satisfied

 

Your heart beating next to me

 Hearing whispers of love

Laughter that never ends

Feeling oh so satisfied 

 

I hear your voice calling

See you everywhere

You are in my heart

 In my head

I just can't stop

 

I wish I had you by my side

So I would not be empty and alone

But you left me long ago

Found someone new

 Now I am forever unsatisfied

 

I hear your voice calling

See you everywhere

You are in my heart

 In my head

I just can't stop

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Layla J Omorose]

Nicely written poem. The liked the repetition of the feeling satisfied. Yet at then end the speaker was not.,good write

[Melobldnfr]

Lyrical. Really makes me want to sing and play guitar!

[Cassie Fraga]

ooohhhh such a captivating piece... I love it!!

[Janice Ann]

I agree with the person below my comment, it does sound like a beautiful, sexy love song...I was in fact humming along, still am!

[Valentine]

Sounds a lot like song lyrics..I was humming along as I read this one..Good going..Kathie

[JanieB]

Very good lyrics for a song.

[cat13]

I love how you end this poem 'I just can't stop' - its such a strong feeling when you miss someone, it is unstoppable. Wonderful stuff:)

[manchilld99]

very nice how you present a picture of what is so satisfying as a means of showing how unsatisfying it is to be left alone and miss someone ... the thoughts and feelings do linger.

[Muse]

I think this is awesome! The rhyme, the flow, the poetic muses worked very well for you in this writing. Simply gorgeous!

[Fire Tulip]

Filled with alot of passion and heartbreak! I really enjoyed this