Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep

For the creative poetry group!

She lays on a bed of nonexistent dreams,

watches the pendulum move back and forth.

Sliver moon shines reflective memories

across her weary face.

Hypnos flies over head,

leaving a feeling of cosmos.

She fades into a hypnotic state

as mysterious eyes peer down.

Slumber finally drifts in on

a midnight breeze.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

What a peaceful write!
With the midnight breeze
and the light of the silvery moon,
such a feeling of cosmic wonder
your poem gave me.
Lovely poem.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This was beautiful work. I love the way you made my mind just drift off into a peaceful serene place. You made me feel a priceless comfort.