Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep

For the creative poetry group!

She lays on a bed of nonexistent dreams,

watches the pendulum move back and forth.

Sliver moon shines reflective memories

across her weary face.

Hypnos flies over head,

leaving a feeling of cosmos.

She fades into a hypnotic state

as mysterious eyes peer down.

Slumber finally drifts in on

a midnight breeze.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Jibey]

I think this is a nice kind of self-lullaby... gentle, soothing, sleepy

[Brad]

very existential! i was asleep and floating on that dreamstate right along side you

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely..!!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the refreshing sense I get from the words, mixed with inner sadness :)

[Ruth]

This is transcendental! Beautifully spoken love..wanderings of the mind and vision before sleep...so beautifully peaceful! xx

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and peaceful poem. After I read the poem. Gave me peace and calm. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[trainwreck]

This was a strong poem, very interesting, kinda vague though.

[Donna Lorenz]

The diary of a slumbering me.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

This is a hypnotic poem, as I was pulled in all the way to the peaceful ending.
Nicely done!