Forever Love

The greatest gift of all is loving him.

Heart is always full and never empty.

Happiness and life is a bow made into

a package of forever.

 

She remembers time gone by.

A fountain of youth cascades in the garden.

Lavendar scents, vivid roses nodding in

agreement to a buding romance.

 

Four feet glide across bricks of forever,

dancing to tunes of whimsical melodies.

The world around them radiates from their engery.

A soft glow around their silhouettes

send them on a journey of tomorrows to come.

 

Lightning bugs envelope them.

Warm hearts melt together.

Lips touch and passion explodes.

Green clover surrounds them as they

lay down on a bed of hot desire.

 

Each become one, heated by sensuous lovemaking.

Beads of orgasm break out a sauna of blinding sex.

Endless magic circles their bodies as sparks ignite.

His words are like an instrument of soothing peace.

Volume of moans escape as she looks

into hour glass eyes.

 

She loved him yesterday, and she loves him today,

and will still love him tomorrow.

             Forever.

 

She sinks into life's dreams,

captived by a chain of forever.

Above the storm of passion whimpers of clusive love

pass over two bodies.

 

Tears decend a now wrinkled skin.

She lays her novel in her lap.

She sits in a garden of ages gone by,

living in a fantasy of forever.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Valentine]

How sad an ending..before that you had me thinking about my honey,,at least he is real and permanent..unless God calls him home..Nice one..Kathie

[Dreamer]

she loved him yesterday, and she loves him today, and will love him tomorrow. Forever." I can almost completely relate to this line. Makes me kind of sad- which means that your poem evokes emotions and makes me think of my own life, which means its relatable and i can go on and on.lol But seriously, this is good work.

[trainwreck]

You really should give this a Teen or Mature rating. That said, this was well written and flowed very nicely.

[OT]

"a package of forever" - loved that image - the eternal love - nice!

[An owl on the moon]

There is the fragrance of love and life moving over time... that which seems so real.. and that which is only hovering in the mind.. lingering ever and always.. Brilliantly woven words.

[Tate Morgan]

Love tends to trancend life and age does it not the skip in our step the feeling of youth.


Had I youth's blood and thoughtful mood
and a heart of fire once more,
For all the gold the world might hold
I'd never leave your shore,

[Krystal Nicole]

Loved it. . Very beautiful

[WindSong]

I think this is a very well written tale of true romance and times gone by, and in the end "tears descend..." The last stanza is just so beautiful!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

How we long for youth and the wild passionate love that it often brings. We long for those days as we move further and further away from them. We forget the pain of being young and only remember the beauty. A wonderful poem.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Bravo! That ending just came out of nowhere.
This story was elegant and beautifully told.