She Says, He Says

Relationship gone bad!

Two desolate hearts,

living together, yet apart.

Entangled with fake vows.

Imaginations run to mischief.

Lives discord and empty.

 

She says her heart is

a wash board soaped up

with his lies.

Stains of past memories

set in for life.

 

He says he's been pulled

through the ringer

and hung out to dry.

Fresh air of resentment

fragrance his body.

 

Two repeled hearts,

living together, yet apart.

Jig-saw puzzle scattered

about, reflecting their broken lives.

Everyday is an addition of the past.

 

She says he's an invasion

of unwelcome attitude.

Acid leaving a sour taste,

and bitterness chasing humiliation.

 

He says his brain waves

are flustered by her feminine rights.

Blame of all mistakes bandage

his point of views.

 

Two mimic hearts,

living together, yet apart,

mocking the other's behavior.

Nonchalant grins stab their souls.

 

She says he's an alcoholic

an open bottle of abuse.

An exhaust pipe giving

her fumes of displeasure.

 

He says she is diluted

with diminishing beauty.

Elastic figure that doesn't

bounce back to size.

 

Two exploited hearts,

living together, yet apart.

Seams that once was joined

lays raveled on the floor,

because of....

 

She says

He says

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Julie Beth]

i think its amazing :D

[Krystal Nicole]

I loved it!! Loved the flow and great job!

[Rosey]

"Elastic figure that doesn't
bounce back to size."
I love it! Good poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

When all you have is negative words. Time to move on. Some humor is OK. A poem with a sad story. Sometime people fall apart. Two options. Repair the mistakes by being kind or dig a hole too deep to repair. I like the way you made the point in this poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote