Scandal Of Lies

Adultery Bliss! (For The Creative Poetry Group!)

Two people meant to be together.

Casual eyes stare into his,

tempting him with a smile.

Hearts full of love.

 

She puckers her lips,

Labret ear ring sparkles.

His tongue teases her's.

Bodies combine in intimancy.

 

Mantic mind tells her

he is the one.

They are in a time

machine of forever.

Wrapped in silk sheets,

and perfect passion.

 

Their sardonic friends

say they won't last,

wake up from deceitful land.

We say love remains

and life goes on.

 

Aroma of a sweet scone

tantalize their noses.

Sugary lips kiss.

One man, One woman

living in adultery  heaven.

 

Feeling of being in

a labyrinth of lies.

Each married to another,

but they pervert their

hearts that love remains

and life goes on.

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[VelvetRosetta]

Enjoyed this... one longs to find the perfect love "one"...and though it may not last forever, love remains and life goes on... bravo!

[Tina Kline]

I really like this. Great job on using the words picked this week. What kind of love is love if its a lie? It never really does end well.

[OT]

very well written! I enjoyed it - and like the title and theme too - you've done well with it here - only thing I noticed was "say they want last," - I think you might mean "won't" instead of "want" - but yeah, another great write!! nice!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Nicely woven..!!!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Living a lie for love. I don't think I could pull that off if so inclined. I am graced with true love, from my life partner.
Excellent story, the end is a kick in the pants.

[Poetic Beauty]

you did really well with this poem and the images are very clear. Only thing is labret piercing is in he lip right in the middle. It is cool though. I love this poem and the tale you have weaved here.

[Tasha]

This was very well written and described. You did a fantastic job using the topic as well. All in all, great job.

[Art Sun]

nice work on this poem...love is every where and everyone loves to be in love...even when it's a lie...

[Sean Allen]

Interesting topic and well told.