Interesting view...an adulterous affair that others don't approve of and think won't last, but they turn their noses up and close their eyes, remaining in their love-addled bliss. Reality will shatter their bubble eventually, as it can never truly remain a "secret." But then, this is the experienced cynic, speaking...very provoking!
I really like this. They're caught up in the emotional pit of physical sensations. The price of deceit can just get way too high. It never ends well. You're very talented.
I really really liked this! Every line i read made me feel tingly all over. A brilliant poem. The one thing we all look for in life; many will relate to this!
Perverted love, adultery, rationalization. If the forces of attraction between two people are strong enough, morality gives way to animalistic desire and passion. It is love that keeps them together, regardless of societal or religious sanctions that try, in vain, to tear them apart. Mankind is not monogamous by nature. Love is everlasting despite the outcome of this couple.
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