Visions Of Love

Living in darkness,

eyes wide open.

My days fashioned with visions of you.

 

Your eyes see my beauty.

Thoughts of me keep your mind entertained.

Love heightens as I let you enter me.

 

 

Your face is molded into my touch.

Features form on my fingers.

Frame of your body is planted in the center of my darkness.

 

Sounds paint a picture.

Evoke colours mix harmonies of our love,

calming and inspirational as we climax.

 

My senses are superior to your's.

My tongue is sharpened,

words of passion leave a stamp on your heart.

Precious hums escape as lips meet.

 

We have a primitive style,

lovemaking is a world of exploring.

Two energetic bodies entwined.

Love so surreal it's sensuous,

and sends warm sensations.

 

My eyes are dark,

but my heart is open.

Blindness doesn't keep me from seeing your love.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Clay Feet]

We have a primitive style,

"lovemaking is a world of exploring.

Two energetic bodies entwined.

Love so surreal it's sensuous,

and sends warm sensations."

Sex is often confused with love. In this piece you have brought more than the act of lovemaking, you have included the sensual with a gentle sense of the care that underlies the deepest sharing of giving and receiving possible between two open hearts filled with love.

Intimately beautiful writing.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You brought out the primal instincts in this piece.
Steamy!

[guiltyascharged]

Different from what I usually read... But I really liked this. I enjoyed reading it and it was really good... Just different...

[Jibey]

An interesting blend of senses and feelings...

[Sean Allen]

I think this is a very interesting piece of writing, although it probably won't make it into yours and your sisters cookbook!

[Krystal Nicole]

Wonderful peice! Great job!