Visions Of Love

Living in darkness,

eyes wide open.

My days fashioned with visions of you.

 

Your eyes see my beauty.

Thoughts of me keep your mind entertained.

Love heightens as I let you enter me.

 

 

Your face is molded into my touch.

Features form on my fingers.

Frame of your body is planted in the center of my darkness.

 

Sounds paint a picture.

Evoke colours mix harmonies of our love,

calming and inspirational as we climax.

 

My senses are superior to your's.

My tongue is sharpened,

words of passion leave a stamp on your heart.

Precious hums escape as lips meet.

 

We have a primitive style,

lovemaking is a world of exploring.

Two energetic bodies entwined.

Love so surreal it's sensuous,

and sends warm sensations.

 

My eyes are dark,

but my heart is open.

Blindness doesn't keep me from seeing your love.

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Jess.]

I like it. Good write!

[Brad]

with love, we don't need our eyes to see

[Tina Kline]

This is wonderful, romantic, erotic and tender. The last line is the most powerful one. You can see something many different ways and love is expressed in many different ways.

[VelvetRosetta]

Very sensual and direct, I like this form of writing, not vulgar...but just the right amount off rawness to it. Wonderful piece!

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong and direct expression of emotion. I believe sometime when two people know a different hunger in the bedroom can help a relationship. Life and sex are in two corners of life. Love is a forever emotion. Satisfying of the body is a hunger that grow with each touch. I like this poem. A very strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[SheWhoWillNotBeNamed]

Such a warming piece:)

[Shawn Pfister]

"My tongue is sharpen" Sharp or sharpened?
"Words of passions leaves" leave not leaves (it refers back to words, not passion).

You have this juxtaposition of actual description of what's happening and flowery romance novel descriptions that intrigues me.

[Art Sun]

those visions of love are captivated within your poem...nice thoughts

[Poetic Beauty]

the way you paint the sensuality in this piece is delicate and enticing. You have made this a lace filled stunning piece. the last stanza say so much.