Visions Of Love

Living in darkness,

eyes wide open.

My days fashioned with visions of you.

 

Your eyes see my beauty.

Thoughts of me keep your mind entertained.

Love heightens as I let you enter me.

 

 

Your face is molded into my touch.

Features form on my fingers.

Frame of your body is planted in the center of my darkness.

 

Sounds paint a picture.

Evoke colours mix harmonies of our love,

calming and inspirational as we climax.

 

My senses are superior to your's.

My tongue is sharpened,

words of passion leave a stamp on your heart.

Precious hums escape as lips meet.

 

We have a primitive style,

lovemaking is a world of exploring.

Two energetic bodies entwined.

Love so surreal it's sensuous,

and sends warm sensations.

 

My eyes are dark,

but my heart is open.

Blindness doesn't keep me from seeing your love.

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[trainwreck]

This is a great idea! I would love to see this explored in further detail.

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Valentine]

Shouldbe rated X otherwise let the younger readers beware..lol Val

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!!

Great imagination..!!

[WindSong]

Beautiful imagery of love.

[OT]

the name - all I could hear was Mariah Carey haha - though you quickly swept that aside with the words - "my eyes are dark, but my heart is open" - perfect way to close! nice!

[Peggy Gildon]

Oh My! What a beautiful way you have with words. Such vivid imagery! That last line caused my mouth to drop! AWESOME!

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a dramatic movement in your sensuality expressed here.. and the story behind this passion as well.. the blindness, yes love shared in seeing through touch and taste.. Two become one and life is bliss.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I really like this one. It's so true. Loving someone is done with more than just the eyes. Its done with all of you. A very romantic poem.

[Ruth]

I think this is sensational....a beautiful poem with so much vividness! xx

[?]

Very nice, like this one alot
especially the ending,