Finding Your Way

Another try at a short poem!

The Earth, in all it's glory

keeps busy spinning.

We get dizzy

just trying to find

our way.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[trainwreck]

Nice little work! Good expression.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Correctly said..!!!!

[Desert Dreamer]

I must agree, life can make one dizzy with all the choices and the stressful lives we lead. You may not have intended this, but your first line makes me wonder if we should look to the Earth to give us guidance, it does keep spinning after all without any apparant dizziness, maybe we can learn to spin without getting dizzy. I enjoyed this poem, made me think

[Shawn Pfister]

Short and to the point, good poem.
For more emphasis try a comma after Earth (which should be capitalized as it's referring to the planet and not dirt) and glory.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Well done! Well done! Nothing more need said, this says it all. Excellent!

[Art Sun]

ain't that the truth...

[SheWhoWillNotBeNamed]

Luved it!

[VelvetRosetta]

And so we do! My head I believe, spins more than the world....so many thoughts, things to do and places to go...but in all...what we really search for is love and happiness...
Nicely done!

[Clay Feet]

Nicely penned thoughts on the worldly plight
Suffered by all ... so many choices confuse our compass,
Vertigo inducing sphere of life.

[Star Wolf]

I like this one. It paints a good picture of humanity in all its activity and the Earth just keeps on turning. Awesome!