Am I In Love?

Signs of love!

Physical responses are out of bounds.

Cheeks blush, skin is tingly.

Stomach flip flops.

 There's a lump in my throat.

Twisted tongue keeps me from talking.

 

When you're around I stare,

and carry a bold smile.

I've got the breathless dizzies.

Dreamy mind wonders what our kids

will look like.

 

People say I'm glowing.

Dating others is out of the question,

you're my object of affection.

I have a strong physical attraction,

my heart belongs to you already.

 

I try to be suggestive and inviting,

but shyness is wrapped around me.

Jealousy overpowers  me when you talk to others.

 

Chemicals of love race through my veins.

I feel high, absent-minded.

Concentration is useless, my mind is full of you.

Everything is a constant reminder of the hole

in my heart,where you belong.

 

I thirst for you like a dry desert land thirst for rain.

My nervous twitches,

and warm fuzzy body confirms my love.

 

There's only one problem left,

How do I tell you how I feel?

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I love this poem. You gave us a confessional that the reader can live vicariously through..as we all like to save face by refusing these emotions exist.
I love how out of control this poem is.

[OT]

ah an emotive and passionate write - very tender at parts - the desire and longing too! nice!

[Rossen]

Every line is good, you have control over the emotive parts
this is good writing~

[trainwreck]

This was awesome. Good job on the feeling of love.

[Coyote Poetry]

I came from a different generation. We were more polite in love. Slow and easy was the pace. It was a better time. I like this poem. When love overtake us. Hard to think properly. We know when the love bug is inside us. Our dreams become the desire to open a new door to love and the possibilities. A excellent poem. The emotions were written strong and true.
Coyote

[Art Sun]

Those butterflies have entered and you cannot escape...well until you become one with your love and maybe still..those butterfly emotions carry on...

[Judy Ponceby]

Wow!! Um ... just hand him this poem, there would absolutely be NO doubt. Well done!

[Tallulah]

"I thirst for you like a dry desert land thirst for rain."
^ I absolutely love that line. I think it's my favorite from the whole piece. This is so cute and sweet and definitely show what its like to be in love. This is so well written I love it. Great job!

[Jim Parson]

This is really beautiful! Yes, you are in love and telling him is easy. Just let him read this! I love your word choices and how well you make the reader feel the emotion. Well done!

[Crayon]

I don't know what love feels like, but this is a great well written poem! well done :)