Time After Time

Where is time going?

Yesterdays time is past,

but todays present time

sweeps us by

 until we're in the

furture of tomorrow's time.

When death ends our life,

time is put to rest.

Author's Note

Tell me, Do you like it?

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Nice work..!!

[trainwreck]

This was an interesting read. Good job.

[SpokenWord]

I like to think that our death means time is frozen and we are stuck in a never ending now that doesn't allow us to move. Good write.

[Nothing Personal]

Time never stops..but alas we do..Great way of putting that thought in a philosophical web of sorts..Good job!!!

[Nobody.]

Strong philosophical short. really makes the mind work...and the heart, too.
Cheers!

[Jess.]

Love it! Short, yet tells us so much. Nice!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

so intensely deep, crazy true

[Rossen]

YES! just the way it is... reads great, nice timing

[Judy Ponceby]

I do like it very much. :) I like how you followed time through past present and future.
This is only my opinion so take it lightly :) but I think it would read outloud better if the line breaks were a little different.
sweeps us by (on a line on its own)
Just a thought. :) The concept is excellent and well worded :) Thank you for sharing. ( I like the line "future of tomorrow's time.", nice turn of phrase there. :)

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

i do like it. its nice, simple and makes me alert to live life to its fullest. great poem write more

-chloe brolund~nothing girl