Time After Time

Where is time going?

Yesterdays time is past,

but todays present time

sweeps us by

 until we're in the

furture of tomorrow's time.

When death ends our life,

time is put to rest.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Thea Fuentebella]

nice write. it made me stop and think for a while...it's deep once you really read it.
thanks for sharing :)
100/100

[Coyote Poetry]

Time is our most valuable thing we have. Best to use wisely and do the right things. The poem told a complete journey in very few words. Death comes for the all of us. We best do some good before he come a-knocking. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tina Kline]

So very true! Love the way you captured what could be all dark and gloomy in a lovely and positive way, even that last drop of darkness at the end of the poem. It has a rather peaceful feel to it, I think.

[Stef Outsiders]

small but really sweet, i can see it more like a motto...

[Valentine]

This is truthful,,sad to say as we all are heading for that last day..Valentine

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Yes, I like it!

[Brad]

thanks, now i have a nosebleed

[Shiningwolf]

Very straight forward. It's the honest truth. ;)

[Alicia Schroeder]

this is direct and straight to the point, a great display of words, with great meaning..

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is touching work.
The words mean alot to me right now.