Modern Definition

Their lives together!

He brings her breakfast in bed,

whimsical impulse amazes her.

Wistful thoughts dance in his head,

he's never negative.

Laughter escapes her lips at his witty humor.

Wizard smart, good with his hands.

Love making is powerful.

She has her modern definition of him,

He's her everything, all she needs.

 

Sensational looks,

sandy hair silky smooth.

Deep ocean blue eyes,

and dimples appear when he smiles.

His sensitive side is so sweet.

personality that shimmers.

Steadfast dreams he'll make come true.

She has her modern definition of him,

always likeable and loveable.

 

His life is perfection, he works hard.

Plentiful supply of all she needs.

She's so happy to have the pleasure

of him as her husband..

He's positive, magnets is what

they'll be, never apart.

She has her modern definition of him,

togetherness is what he's about.

 

His love is dependable, never fake.

He still takes her on dates.

Daring is his middle name.

His words is so descriptive,

full of magic.

She has her modern definition of him,

Fairy tale life, he's so surreal.

 

Daily their love grows,

In sickness and health.

Choices they'll make together.

Today and always they'll be in love.

Isn't their lives perfect?

Only eyes for one another.

Nobody will come between them,

As many will try.

Real love stays strong.

Yes, their love is real.

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Mark]

I was impressed with the strength of your emotion, so much so that I was (almost) able to overlook the many misspellings, foremost: "definition".

[Brad]

man, that's a double sigh and a half, magic in these words

[Ladysue]

oh this is beautiful and shows just how wonderful love can be...nicely done.

[Art Sun]

Nice thoughts...love is so magical, and when it lasts through the lifetime of two Souls enveloped within life it gives out a radiance for everyone to see and beleive in...you expressed this very well within this poem...

nice...

[Loner]

Nice work.

[Rossen]

I feel lonely and sad, you are good!

[Karina Longo]

That's amazing. Such a touching piece of writing which tells us a story of true love that lasts forever. It reminds me of my boyfriend whom I intend to marry one day so you brought a tear in my eye. It is full of detail - could be a song or a short story. Lovely.

[trainwreck]

Very cute and sweet. I liked it.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sounds like quite a guy.
Better keep him close.

[?]

This was beautiful, well written, the flow was awesome.
Perfection in my book