Friendly Friends

Happy people!

Eruption of smiles on faces,

warmth aglow.

Friendly people,

spreading contagious love.

Author's Note

Trying something new, a very short poem. Tell me does it make sense? What do you think about it?

Reviews

[Honey]

i just suggest that you should pick a bit of a different title
this sounds like more of a family description
not really one of friendly friends

[Magdelena]

I like it! Sometimes a few simple lines can say so much more than a whole paragraph. This said it all!

Well done me gal,

Mags xx

[FleetingReveries]

This is cute :) Short and sweet! Nicely done!

[Julie Beth]

i think it amazing you did a great job :)

[Alicia Schroeder]

beautiful, short and sweet

[Nobody.]

I like it. makes sense. the only correction I'd suggest is that aglow should be a single word. Other than that, it makes me think of the loved ones I treasure more highly than silver or gold. Those treasures with pulses who can't be replaced. Good stuff. Cheers!

[Gone]

Nice poem that makes perfect sense.