Friendly Friends

Happy people!

Eruption of smiles on faces,

warmth aglow.

Friendly people,

spreading contagious love.

Author's Note

Trying something new, a very short poem. Tell me does it make sense? What do you think about it?

Reviews

[InkSlinger]

Yup, this works just fine.. Glad to see you pushing yourself to diversify..

[Brad]

makes plenty of sense, and makes me miss my family

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very upbeat, and cheerful. I like how you can say the meaning in a few short lines. Brillian job~

[JanieB]

This is a really sweet and happy poem. I like it. Smiling at people can help change someones day..

[Kelley]

I think it works. Kind of like a Haiku.
Powerful words and strong feelings.

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Nothing Personal]

It does. A poem you would write after those quiet evening parties with friends over coffee, gossip and smacking jokes..Good write..I could relate to it..

[Stef Outsiders]

simply, delightful and it does make sense!... praise for trying something new!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

yay for trying new things, lol!

[Ladysue]

This was uplifting and spirited...wonderfully done...

[Undying Glory]

this was short and very captivating work, i love this simple but brilliant depiction of friends here. awesome write!