Friendly Friends

Friendly Friends

A Poem by KAREN
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Happy people!

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Eruption of smiles on faces,

warmth aglow.

Friendly people,

spreading contagious love.

© 2011 KAREN


Author's Note

KAREN
Trying something new, a very short poem. Tell me does it make sense? What do you think about it?

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its not how many words one uses, the key is that mama bear portion of just right , the essence of your words brings a smile ..

Posted 13 Years Ago


We don't necessarily need a whole lot of words to express a feeling. Sometimes less is more, and I think this is one of those times. Well done!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem makes me smile ^-^

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very short indeed yet amazingly written. :)



Posted 13 Years Ago


A true friend is one of God's precious commidities..lol and God bless..Valentien

Posted 13 Years Ago


makes since but maybe you can make it longer


Posted 13 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
OT
makes perfect sense!! reminiscent of a good friend or family even? friendly people who can make everything better!! nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Does it make sense?
What a poem does, more than anything, is to take our heart's desires and make them plain, not only to those around us, but even more so to ourselves.
So, what's not to make sense about craving more happiness in one's surroundings?

Posted 13 Years Ago


very good, it makes me kinda sad knowing im not going to have that for a while

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 16, 2011
Last Updated on January 18, 2011
Tags: friends, people, smiles, love

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KAREN
KAREN

Harrisville, MS



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I love to write and cook! Me and my sister will soon be the author of a children's book titled Feelings Feelings Feelings, and a cookbook in the near future titled Two Heads In The Kitchen. I e.. more..

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