When We Met

Meeting someone for the first time!

When we first met your eyes were

alluring me, calling me.

I walk slowly toward you,

almost  gliding, afraid of rejection.

 

Something about  you seems charming.

Was it your looks?

The way you look at me?

Your smile?

 

I knew something magical was about to happen.

We couldn't help ourselves,

you envelop me with a hug.

Your kisses are so sweet.

I knew we would be companionable.

 

You have an enormous disposition......

always loyal,

always sociable,

always neighborly.

Sometimes I have to wonder how I got so lucky.

 

When we go for walks,

you lurk behind trees,

teasing me, wanting me to run after you.

We have so much empathy for one another.

 

You worship the ground I walk on.

I'll cherish what we have forever,

We'll always be together,

and be partners till the end

 

Your hair shines with sheen.

Your brown eyes smile at me.

Your wet nose is so cute.

I'm glad we became acquainted.

You're my big  loveable dog,

my best friend.

 

Author's Note

Something alittle different. Hope you like it and hope it is error free!

Reviews

[deeps]

Oh this is just so cute!! Most enjoyable write.

[Honey]

Aww, that was so cute ^0^
i started to wonder at the part with the wet nose... thought you had a lover with a cold >.>
just look at the usage of "disposition" and also, after "You're my big" you need a comma --> "Youre my big, lovable dog,"
also, i know you can hug a dog, but how can a dog hug you?
hey, do you really have a dog? thats so awesome...

[The Dudeman (Kenneth T)]

Nice. I was deceived by the first part; I had to read it again.

[Cats Eye]

Love the twist, it was an amazing write

[JanieB]

Oh..how I love the ending.. a dog! Utterly fabulous!

[Loner]

What a twist and turn to ones work , really nice and tricky .

[Undying Glory]

yes this was really great work, especially that amazing twist at the end, now this is really interesting! this was very well-written!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

sweet poem. This is true love.

[underwriter]

haha, i love the ending!!! not what i was expecting at all! very cute write!! i love the twist at the end!!

[Ron]

First word last verse capital "Y." Tiny error in a lovely lyrical poem. Sweet twist at the end. Contrast this with twin sisters latest poem on domestic violence and we have the ultimate works contrasting light and shade! This poem is pure "sunlight."