Entwined Love

Hand in hand,

holding on to one another,

consumed with lust and desire.

Our passion is awakened by the love we have for each other.

 

Lip to lip,

kissing one another,

unable to keep our feelings at bay.

We continually grow together.

 

Eye to eye,

we stare at one another,

not needing words to express our love.

Our relationship is enchanting, magical.

 

Ear to ear,

listening to one another,

boasting about the love we have.

Never turning a deaf ear.

 

Heart to heart,

locked together forever.

We threw away the key.

Our blood pumps as one blood flow,

our hearts beats as one.

 

Hand in hand

Lip to lip

Eye to eye

Ear to ear

Heart to heart

Never to be separated,

together forever.

Author's Note

I don't know if this is a good write, tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Jamie S.]

This is better than most writings I see on wedding and anniversary cards. You have a way with romantic words, I love reading this type of writing but havent dabbled with writing it myself. Great little write, thank you for sharing somthing so sweet and personal :)

[Goodbye]

So very romantic, so very sweet - your love is lucky to be thought of and written of in this way!

Excellent poem of Amore!

[sarah]

awwwwwwww this is so sweet!

[VelvetRosetta]

People in relationships often forget what you described here...it's one reason many relationships end, we forget to , look, listen, see, feel...
Wonderful words to take to the heart.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a nice poem. Seems like something that could
be heard at a wedding. The words are full of love.

such a strong sense of love, very sweet :)

[Coyote Poetry]

It a beautiful poem of love. We need those love poems. I wrote some 35 years ago. The words are kind and sweet like love support to be. I like the ending to the outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[HopelesslyDevoted]

omg! this is awesome! i wish i would have thought of this and wrote it first! i think this has to be my favorite love poem that i have ever read on this website
crazy good!

[An owl on the moon]

You create that overwhelming sense of love that completely envelopes the lovers.. Embracing in each other, they learn to love in every way.

[G. K. Bostic]

I like the organization and symmetry....well done!!

[?]

It is a good write!! I just love this. I can relate and Im sure millions of others can too. This was written beautifully with your heart in love.
My favorite line that stood out so much is:
Heart to heart,
locked together forever
Great write