Hello

When you're afraid to talk to someone!

Hello,

you don't know me,

but I wish you did

my heart will be unsatisfied

until I make myself known to you

 

Hello,

one simple word,

but I'm unable to speak when I see you

my legs fail to move, they want obey

all I can do is stare

 

Hello,

you're so handsome

your dimples make me smile

our bodies  would fit together like a puzzle

the sound of your voice is like  music to my ears

 

Hello,

I know you see me staring,

the want in my eyes does not lie

Do you feel the same?

Do you want me too?

 

Hello,

I close my eyes and I see you

we're arm in arm,

your lips teasing mine

you're undressing me with your eyes

 

Hello,

one simple word I have decided to say

all you can do is turn me away

I put one foot in front of the other

as I near you I realize I can't do it

 

Tears streams down my freckled face,

I turn to walk away

I feel the warmth of a hand on my shoulder

I turn around, then I hear one simple word

 

"Hello"

 

Author's Note

Tell if it's good or bad! Thank you!!!

Reviews

[Julie Beth]

this is really good great job :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You would have no problem making a great song out of this.
I love the emotional content.

[cfix]

I really liked and enjoyed this write.
I thought it was really good.
Wonderful rhyme scheme and flow.

[Nothing Personal]

But your writing is real Good.. ;-)

[Nothing Personal]

Its good. Its real good. The rhyme, the feel, the message. I so enjoyed..And especially what difference a single word ( 'Hello') can do..Keep writing..