Hello

When you're afraid to talk to someone!

Hello,

you don't know me,

but I wish you did

my heart will be unsatisfied

until I make myself known to you

 

Hello,

one simple word,

but I'm unable to speak when I see you

my legs fail to move, they want obey

all I can do is stare

 

Hello,

you're so handsome

your dimples make me smile

our bodies  would fit together like a puzzle

the sound of your voice is like  music to my ears

 

Hello,

I know you see me staring,

the want in my eyes does not lie

Do you feel the same?

Do you want me too?

 

Hello,

I close my eyes and I see you

we're arm in arm,

your lips teasing mine

you're undressing me with your eyes

 

Hello,

one simple word I have decided to say

all you can do is turn me away

I put one foot in front of the other

as I near you I realize I can't do it

 

Tears streams down my freckled face,

I turn to walk away

I feel the warmth of a hand on my shoulder

I turn around, then I hear one simple word

 

"Hello"

 

Author's Note

Tell if it's good or bad! Thank you!!!

Reviews

[J.R Schlievert]

Haha Awwwwww, amazing how one simple word can be such a hassle for your tongue to form to. I liked the rhythm of this poem, even though there is know legitimate rhyme scheme.

Well Done :D

[JulieNorell]

Aww! Thats SO sweet!

[deeps]

OH this is so sweet and loving. I really enjoyed this.

[OtherWorldWoman]

Awee :] It's sweet...I like it.

[hannahspelledbackwards]

I really like the repetition and the ending made me smile. Love it :)

[Gone]

You should enter this in a competition. This is good work.

[FleetingReveries]

Very Good! This was so cute :) The ending was delightful. The repetition was well used :)

[Alicia Schroeder]

I think it's great!

[Ron]

I like it . You made the word "Hello" strong within this whish is difficult! I just so jealous of that luck male wretch!