Into The Night

Two lovers that has to wait until night to be together!

I sit in awe,

staring into space.

Your marvelous beauty

takes my breath away.

 

Strawberry red hair,

blowing in the wind.

Sparks of moon light,

making you glow.

 

Your porcelain skin,

and slender body

is so prefectly put together.

I want to hold you

and never let you go.

 

I spread the blanket out,

lay you down carefully.

I contemplate on my next move,

not wanting to scare you away.

 

My lips spreads into a smile.

I kiss you deeply,

tasting the sweetness of you.

We bellow out in unison,

our hunger being fed.

 

The crickets plays a melody.

We dance around in the darkness,

our arms tightly  around each other.

 

I see a shooting star,

closing my eyes I make a wish.

I wish you would bite my neck,

but you refuse to bring me into your world.

 

My beautiful vampire,

if only nights could last forever.

 

 

Author's Note

Alittle different! Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Ron]

I find vampire themes confusing. I just imagine Vincent Price grinning and his vampires pouting fake blood. I think Bram Stoker and his characters would be bemused by the modern concept of his toothy girls. Bring back Vlad the Impaler! It was so simple in his day!

[sarah]

sort of reminds me of twlight! lol great work

[Mason]

i love the fourth stanza. the desire to be gentle as not to scare off a partner, i think its a part of all males sexuality. very good description. it flows like water.

[Ladysue]

This has some really good imagery. Nice flow too...

[Misty Blue Eyes]

LOVE this it's perfect my god i love this

[JulieNorell]

This is an awesome read! Very descriptive! Keep it up!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is so AWESOME!

[Brad]

um...i need to be alone for a bit *retracts fangs and gargles last nights meal*

[Goodbye]

Those darn secretive Vampires! Very good little tale you weave!!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Creates a perfect picture. Great job.