Opposite Girl

On and off relationship!

You think you give me pleasure,

make my life adventurous.

 

You think you're attentive,

but all you do is neglect my feelings.

 

You think you're humorous,

you're not funny at all.

 

You think you have extravagant taste,

if you did you would love me for me.

 

You think you make me happy,

I'm sad all the time.

 

You think you lavish me in love,

confident I'll never leave you.

 

WRONG!

 

You make me feel like an opposite girl,

you're in

you're out

You don't love me enough to make up your mind.

 

You make me feel like an opposite girl,

you love me

no, you hate me

I know which one it is, you think I don't.

 

You make me feel like an opposite girl,

beautiful

wait, you're ugly

Delicate. feminine, delicious that's me!

 

You want me to be an opposite girl,

here it goes.

I want you gone, not to stay.

I want you far, not near.

 

I've seen your back side more than your front side anyways,

GOOD-bye!

 

 

 

Author's Note

Hope you like, just let me know!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. When you treat someone the wrong way. You can be tossed out on the road. I like the description and the very good ending. Can't change people. Take them as they are or leave them alone. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Steve]

Sorry,.....but i thought this was really funny! Espeically the last line about seeing his back more than his front! Very well done.

[Shellie]

yeah i like it, esp the knowledge of conflicting feelings and they you admit you wont put up with it. it was very good well done

[Liza]

i have felt this many times; you have described it superbly...its an inner fight within a woman that realizes that a man is only good for one thing and doesn't nurture her mind or her emotions....

[Ladysue]

Oh I love the conviction in this one...nicely done!

[Goodbye]

Very, very good - it has the cadences of a song - you should try marketing it that way. The only grammatical thing that stood out would be where you have, "...a opposite girl" should be "...an opposite girl". But I really, really liked it and could definitely relate to it!

[Daniel Soloye]

Amazing bravo!

[Stacey Watts]

I like the attitude you exude here. It says you are not going to take it anymore. Very well written and fun to read. It was well expressed. You did very well in showing how hard relationships can be.

[InkSlinger]

I think HE has just been b***h-slapped.. I guess he will get one last look at your backside as you flip him off.. Great way to express your anger.. Well done!!

[?]

Well written, very true in alot of peoples lives.

WRONG!

I've seen your back side more than your front side anyways,
GOOD-bye!

Love it!!!!