Four Seasons

Missing the one you love!

In the spring I miss you,

thats when you brought me flowers

I can smell the scent of them right now,

the memory fresh in my mind

 

In the summer I feel hatred in my heart,

thats when I woke to an empty bed

you left me and I never saw you again,

until that dreadful day I saw you with her

 

In the fall I think of all the changes I've  gone through

I wish you would have changed,

you wished I would have changed

neither one of us did

 

In the winter I'm lonely without you,

the warmth of your arms around me

I feel dead inside

you left me all alone and empty!

 

Author's Note

Something that just hit me and I wrote it down!

Reviews

[Dark Aeris]

Sad. So many sublime qualities since this poem is beautiful yet so depressing...

[sarah]

this is soooooo sad!

Break ups are so painful...
Isn't nice that we can write to throw away some of the feelings~!!! :-))))

[Misty Blue Eyes]

very crafty hun love it

[Goodbye]

I feel you here, feel how the emotions change with the seasons - very, very well crafted.

[JanieB]

I like the use of the seasons as stepping stones through your emotions.

[Steve]

Well done! Very, very sad too. I can relate to this.....

[HopelesslyDevoted]

that so fun when something just randomly comes out like that, this is really good.

[Benjamin]

this is a very good piece of poetry. i think that when something hits you you shuld find something and write it down. it seems to work well for you. and for some reason that probably dipicts how one of my friends is feeling at the moment.

[youngwriter222]

I love how you did this poems with all of the seasons and how the writer felt during each season! Strong emotions you used!
Very well done!