Four Seasons

Missing the one you love!

In the spring I miss you,

thats when you brought me flowers

I can smell the scent of them right now,

the memory fresh in my mind

 

In the summer I feel hatred in my heart,

thats when I woke to an empty bed

you left me and I never saw you again,

until that dreadful day I saw you with her

 

In the fall I think of all the changes I've  gone through

I wish you would have changed,

you wished I would have changed

neither one of us did

 

In the winter I'm lonely without you,

the warmth of your arms around me

I feel dead inside

you left me all alone and empty!

 

Author's Note

Something that just hit me and I wrote it down!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

It is funny how a season can bring back good and bad memories. I have a few poems with the seasons as the base of the story. I like the description and the ending. A very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[cfix]

This is so wonderful and touching.
I enjoyed your write.

[NoAirToBreatheXSuffocat..]

So amazing, and simple with a kick. I really like it, good write :))

[Tony]

The very basic language you use articulately and precisely describe the essence of the seasons and human behavior with an incredible emotional impact. Excellent, excellent work here!

[Steve H]

Brilliant, such a simple idea but with a hugely emotional punch!

[Cherrie]

it is amazing how our moods color the seasons, wonderful write

[Brad]

triggers are sometimes the best muses...nicely done, and oh, how i've felt that ache

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

melancholy~ but so beautifully written~

[InkSlinger]

In the spring I miss you
In the summer I feel hatred in my heart
In the fall, I think of all the changes I've gone through
In the winter I'm lonely without you..

In all the times between,
I am filled with thoughts
memories that rise, memories that fall
that leave my knee weak
both in the pain of yesterday
and in the hope of tomorrow..

The four seasons
shall come and go without regard
and I shall morn your memory
for today, my love for you died

Oh so sad.. but with all those little pieces left behind
the shattered pieces of heart, the mark he left on your soul
and the memories.. the lessons you learn
will always bring knowledge, strength and peace to go on

Well done.. very well done