I See

What one may see in the one they love!

I see a heart made of gold,

beautiful ocean blue eyes,

and a smile that warms my soul.

But you don't see what I see!

 

I see loving arms,

soft skin to touch,

and a strong built body.

But you don't see what I see!

 

I see a wonderful man

who will do anything for me,

and always will love me.

 

I see someone who is....

caring, humorous, sexy, loving,

beautiful, fun, outgoing.

But you don't see what I see!

 

I  ask him, "what do you see?"

He says, "I see you, and that's all I need to see!"

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

A poem for all the people who don't see the good in themselves!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I need bigger letter. I'm a old man. True and beautiful words in your poem. I like the complete poem of love. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[the_kate]

So sweet! Love it! (You might want to have a bigger font size, though. Hard to read.)

[Jamie S.]

A sweet write, this type of print is alittle hard on the eyes or maybe Im getting old,lol :)

[youngwriter222]

awww! very cute! He see you and you see him :)

[SpokenWord]

LOL, yes very true if he see's only you how can he see anything else and I like this because it shows that you only see him in the same way. Cute ending

[JanieB]

This is a great poem.
(I suggest the font needs enlarging)

[Angel Bird]

- I see you, and thats all I need to see!

Beautiful and touching. Yes love sees more than the surface.

[Goodbye]

Quite lovely, but a tad small on the font for middle-aged eyes! I did enjoy after squinting, though!

[Bette]

very sweet