Scattered Into Nonexistence

Fragmented thoughts burst

Defeated words into pieces

Maladjusted pain

  

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

Can't help but wonder if you are writing about the art, or found art to go with your write? Quite a picture. And your poem had me visualizing a pain holding its side all bent over slinking away in shame, limping along among the pieces of a headache laying all over your mind.

[KAREN]

Thank you! Good interpretation !

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading

[emmajoygreen]

The picture is so dramatic, I had to look away. That said, have a feeling you chose it very carefully.

Your words, nine of them, say so much, need veer away form thoughts of the above.. and focus on the drama if your powerful words.. seems part pain and part fear of a direction you definitely do not want to travel. Denial of possibility, perhaps, KAREN?

Wish i had read this before now to exchange with you or read your reaction. Take care, keep safe, please.

[Ken Simm.]

Exact feelings about writing. A very sophisticated piece.

[Novram]

This could also have a paranormal interpretation. Autoscopy is when a person sees themselves from the outside, like an out of body experience.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

My take on this is she’s trying to say something but her thoughts or self hate or self worth get in the way she says the opposite of what she really feels
Great art and words

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Chris Shaw]

A thought provoking and powerful piece which matches your chosen artwork Karen. Hope you are OK.

Chris

[KAREN]

Thank you kindly! I am doing good. Been really busy doing flea markets.

[Chris Shaw]

Good to see you.

[KAREN]

Same to you!

[Betty Hermelee]

When the mind is defunct, words seem to scatter and one can't get a grip on it; it's like a giant headache that grips one and holds one in a cage, where words are nil; picking up the pieces is hard, but there should be some hope that when one frees oneself from this grip, words and the mind will flow like a river

[KAREN]

Thanks for stopping by!

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Karen!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the pain of not being able to poem, when the feelings , the thoughts, the words
make a temporary stop in the mind, but move on before we can catch them and release the pain that caused them.
j.

[KAREN]

Thanks so much!

[Cherrie]

Words can be such a trap. Trapping both the target and the speaker. Very powerful poem and clear for all to see.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[L. E. Standoff]

I have no words to say with this poem it is just so amazing and conveys such a terrible feeling with only nine words and that alone is an achievement that only expert writer can achieve so congrats to you for making such a delightful masterpiece.

[KAREN]

WOW! Thanks so much!