What Who Where When How Why

A a wonderful day happens!

       

   What a day

   Luminous sun lit the way

   Iridescent cloudless sky

   Who was there?

   Resplendent flowers

   Butterflies

   Where dreams happen

   mesmerizing sea breeze captivates sighs

   Relaxation breathes deep

   When rest comes

   Empathic thoughts sing

   Calm is born

    How alluring transpires

    Whispers descend from the quiet

    Fulfilling a life

    Why Today?

    Imagination

    Was fictive

   

   

   

   

   

   

   

Author's Note

Collum lune poem 3/5/3 words
and Kelly Lune poem 3/5/3 syllabic count
I put the two together!

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

Another amazing line! 'Empathic thoughts sing'. Wow!. And thanks for explaining the forms for us inquiring minds.

I see your pen has been busy. I'll be back for the rest.

[William Michael Reeves]

Just read it again and thought, how adverbian.

[KAREN]

Thank you, Bill.

[Bryan Sefton]

I could lie and bathe in the warmth of this poem.mere reading is relaxing..

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Chris Shaw]

You create with your words here Karen an ideal setting for calm and peace of mind. The closer to the natural world, the better in my opinion.

Chris

[KAREN]

Thank you for stopping by.

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like this...especially the 4th stanza..."and Empathic thoughts sing/calm is born..."

it is a soothing piece of writing.
j.

[KAREN]

Thank you, j