Life Versus Death

Life Versus Death

A Poem by KAREN
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Life and death!

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Life is a function
Obligation overload
Survival a must
Obstacles steal directions
How will we ever survive?

Death cannot be stopped
Sickness can confiscate lives
steals breath from a heart
Preparation should start now
God is coming back some day


       

© 2022 KAREN


Author's Note

KAREN
Collaboration with my sister, Kathy Sue Sills
I wrote the first stanza and Kathy the second.

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Man! Where do you get all this wisdom from? Very good points you make and share.

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words!
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome kindly.
"Survival a must
Obstacles steal directions"

Posted 2 Years Ago


"Sickness can confiscate lives
steals breath from a heart"

Posted 2 Years Ago


Hello, Karen! :)
This was an interesting read. "Obligation overload" is a great description for life, captures the absurdity of struggling. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!
Well said! So true and hopefully sooner than later. Hugs!

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
Sickness confiscating lives. That's some heavy stuff! You should mention in the notes this is a Somanka. And who wrote what when which one of you two flew first. Or something like that. I take it the answer to the question is God?

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
"Preparation should start now..." Well, I suppose there is wisdom in this. I find it better better to just live one day at a time. Tomorrow is not a given. Well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on April 3, 2022
Last Updated on April 6, 2022
Tags: Life, Death, Living, Dying

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KAREN
KAREN

Harrisville, MS



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