Dancing On the Wings of the Wind

A Sapphic poem about dance!

 I am dancing on the wings of the soft wind

 Basking in the comfortable silent warmth

 Where butterflies pirouette, leaving a glow

          Rivers weave its sparkle

  Orange sun rays waltz with me, gliding on the breeze

  Melodious tunes whisper against the horizon

  Rhythmic emotions play through moving rainbows

           Gently descending

   Music awakens each magical curtsy

   Smiles float on fantasies with Lavendar scents

   Jazzy motions fluid as lyrical poetry

            Beat deep in the soul

     I flow as an individual with ease

     Painting a dream with my twist and turns on life

     I am dancing on the wings of the soft wind

             A language of pride

            

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

The connection to creation and the dance 💃 both tangible and woven in the fabric of life moves in harmony of the dance.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[JE Falcon]

The flow is wonderful, the visuals come through easily, though they are mystical at times, they work well in this case. and I just love the blending of music and the wind. If I were to change anything, I would rethink the last line. --- Overall, both thumbs UP!

[KAREN]

Thank you very much!

[Patricia]

this is really nice, so much going on in this and yet it all works, flows well and has a wonderful feel to it. Well done

[KAREN]

Thank you so much!

[Carola]

wonderfully descriptive, very ethereal.
cheerio carola

[Redding]

Nice lines with deep meaning...

[William Michael Reeves]

I really liked the music awakens stanza. It's downright magical! I bow, since I can't curtsy, to the sound of your notes floating in my brain.

[KAREN]

Thank you kindly!

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful poetry. Stimulates the senses. Sight, sound, hearing and smell, and there is movement too. Enjoyed the lovely imagery on this descriptive write. Well done Karen.

Chris

[KAREN]

Thanks so much!

[heavenscentgirl1]

A BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN POEM. THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR WORDS WITH US. HSG 😇

[KAREN]

Thank you!