Forever Caught in The Midst of a Daydream

Black out poem!

Idealistic dreams beneath each feeling

Gaze at the stars and haunted Demons disappear

Overwhelmed emotions could become realities

Unless solitude comes along and rest in its wake

The remnants of memories tell secret stories

Doors to conspicuous fantasies unlock

Freedom is the essence to dying fear

Profundities of the unknown escape in the breeze

Seized in illusions Melodious music relaxes the soul

The intensity of faint shadows keeps the heart company 

Mesmerizing fragrance drops from the sky like butterflies

Forever caught in the midst of a daydream

Author's Note

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Reviews

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"freedom is the essence of dying fear" lovely line.Yes, freedom...the life line of any life, can be snatched ....but the things we dislike most we try to find those things in our dreams...we are all a little bit of dreamer.....
Nicely written

[KAREN]

Thanks for the awesome review!

[Shelley Warner]

My favorite stanza:
Overwhelmed emotions could become realities
Unless solitude comes along and rest in its wake

What that tells me is that when we start to focus on overwhelming emotions, they lose their power if we take some restful solitude. Your poem has good imagery.

[KAREN]

Thank you for reading!